This is an example of my descriptive writing~
The water shone like a thousand crystals, the trees looked as though they were dancing in the wind with birds singing on every branch. These are only a few things that can describe this magical place. As I took off my old trainers the sharp stones stung my bare feet, as I waded into the clear stream. A few dozen tiny silver fish quickly darted past. I loved the smell of the fresh air. I looked over to the shore and where my mum was unpacking the fresh sandwiches and chips we had packed for a picnic and walked out of the water to help her.
by Monique
This are a few things about me!!!
My favourite foods are Popcorn, chips and Sushi.
My favourite colour is lime green and light blue. I have a keeshond puppy named jasper and a kitten named Bandit.
My hobbies include biscuting, knee boarding, reading and swimming.
MONIQUES WIKI!!!
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This is an example of my descriptive writing~
The water shone like a thousand crystals, the trees looked as though they were dancing in the wind with birds singing on every branch. These are only a few things that can describe this magical place. As I took off my old trainers the sharp stones stung my bare feet, as I waded into the clear stream. A few dozen tiny silver fish quickly darted past. I loved the smell of the fresh air. I looked over to the shore and where my mum was unpacking the fresh sandwiches and chips we had packed for a picnic and walked out of the water to help her.
by Monique
This are a few things about me!!!
My favourite foods are Popcorn, chips and Sushi.
My favourite colour is lime green and light blue.
I have a keeshond puppy named jasper and a kitten named Bandit.
My hobbies include biscuting, knee boarding, reading and swimming.